Wednesday, 7 March 2018

Year 10 Media Arts Short Film Production – Term 01 Mr. Andrews

Task 1: Self-reflection and evaluation:

Please answer each question using complete sentences, including as much detail as possible.


Discuss your feelings about the production task: Please explain your responses:
·      Did you enjoy creating your short film?
Yes, because it was a different experience, being behind the scenes and when you look at the overall movie you remember how hard it was to get it on that angle and how many times you had to shoot that same scene. I got to learn how to use a camera which was really fun because I kind of played around with it, and the lighting was a bit challenging because I was scared it would fall. It was kind of funny how much effort went in it to create a 1.20-minute video, it certainly did use up a lot of time but it was worth it we would look back at our mistakes and try to fix them together as a group.

·      Are you satisfied with the final result?
No, I think we could have done better because of the amount of skips we had, so much to tell on that 1.20-minute time frame. I feel like we could have used a lot more of lighting techniques in our starting part, and because of that we had to leave one of the best parts out the dart board scene because the lighting was dark. But I am satisfied with the story line and how it played although I feel like it could have used more specific shots to be able to show what we were looking for, except we didn’t have the time to after school to get together that much, most was just me and Gurleen trying to figure out what part to video.

·      Did your film turn out as well as you pictured?
No and Yes, I think that I thought it would have been more clear and smooth going and yet it was pretty fast to put everything in at once. I thought I would have some digital effects as well but I couldn’t do that we ran out of time because the places we needed to use were out of our daily reach. So we had to see our parent’s availability and that was the weekend before our assignment was due.

·      Would like to change or improve any aspects of your final film (storyline, shots, editing etc.)?
Yes, I would have been better at editing now that I saw the final product and I would say, I would cut many scenes and re-film a lot of the scenes and make sure the lighting was perfect, and also I would have made sure that we used a variety of different shots to make the film more interesting. I would have had added less shots and have done better in limited shot to make sure the message gets across and also maybe change the story a bit to make t clearer about what we are looking for.

·      If you could start the project again, what would you do differently?
I would right a production schedule at the very start and made sure we all did equal amounts of in put in the film making. I would also ask more questions, because when I was in class I got it but as soon as I went out to produce it was much harder to remember how we could do different types of shots and how we could tell the story in limited shots and go through with my group a bit more. I would also use lots of different lighting and use fake blood to emphasize more meaning and effect into the murder scene.

As this task focused on mise-en-scene and cinematography, describe:
·      How you used specific elements of mise-en-scene to depict your film’s genre and enhance the narrative?
I think that we used mise-en-scene good because we had some many shots to show if the character was powerful or weak and we also used other shots to indicate emotions such as right angle face shot to emphasize what the character was feeling so we closed up on it. We usually used shots like these to show the anger on the main character’s face (Gurleen) in scene 24 through to scene 28. I used power shot for many parts of the film as when Gurleen was killing the half sister (me) she had to look powerful so we would do a far away shot with me in the shot on the ground but it only empowered Gurleen.

·      How you used specific shot types to convey the storyline without dialogue?
I used a close up in the scene when Gurleen was looking at her half sisters photo, the expression matters but depends how we use cinematography, so I used a close up eye level to her and it helped show the anger and frustration of the girl when she saw her sister.

·      Whether the intended genre is depicted clearly or if this could be improved?
I think that it could be improved in the horror part I think it did have thriller and that it was suspenseful as well. I think that we could add more terrifying shots e.g. the shot of the dead half sister dead with blood or that the sister doesn’t even realize when Gurleen is in the room and could be really fast and slow as she falls to the ground.

Reflecting upon your completed task, respond to the following points:

·      How did other people respond to your rough-edit? Did you use their feedback to make changes to the film?
A lot of people gave valuable feed back where we could use some lighting and how it wasn’t suspenseful enough. But we did make it suspenseful but I guess we didn’t really finish the draft so if it had some parts we were missing otherwise we could have had more valuable feedback. We could told that our film was a little unsteady and that it could be more still so we re did that and used different angles, and we used less close ups this time. They were really useful because to me the the film was perfect but when people pointed it out I was like “oh, how did I miss that”.
·      Did your group use the planning and analysis tools effectively? (storyboards, shot lists, mise-en-scene evaluation).
I think we could have been more specific in our planning and used more bits of it and that the storyboard really helped me, because I was the person who did 75% of the video and it helped me and I did redo the whole storyboard from scratch as we changed the story through out, it was easier and I think that it made it much more helpful for me to do it as I wasn’t able to keep contact with my group.
·      Did shooting require more or less time than you thought? Why?
More, because I thought we would only have to do this one Saturday and class, but when no one was ready to be the lead and so we had to spend more time outside of class. And it is hard to get someone who is in another grade to get them to do it for you. Because sometimes I was ready and wanted to do the film but then she had her homework, and she could come up with different idea’s and to put them in it took us longer, because they were good ideas.




DAY/DATE
Filmed?
CAST
LOCATION

DAY 1
15 Feb 2018

Scene 3
-Making an entrance into Bunnings, innocent facial expressions and walk from the start of the isle for 1.5 seconds. No lighting involved as its outside.
Scene 4
-grabbing the duck tape and a still looks innocent and grabs a grey duck tape from box to shoulder length this shot should go for 0.8 seconds. No lighting involved as its outside.
Scene 5
-payment for the duck tape through counter, only showing hands and the tape to compliment the idea of only buying the tape for a special purpose, builds suspense (use medium suspense music), should go for 6.8 seconds  No lighting involved as its outside.
Scene 6
-Going out of Bunnings to the car, Only showing full body and in the middle of the shot half of her body coming towards the camera, giving a smile of accomplishment. This shot should go for 3.5 seconds. No lighting involved as its outside.
 Killer: Gurleen Randhawa

Bunings:
Front desk
Bunnings
-1pm, Sunny day, Adress:
Global Plaza , Oxenford, 4210
Crew: Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa, Ali Duke

Not using Scene 7 (replaced in the final video)
-Gurleen looking down the bridge, thinking hard and confused facial expressions, only using a medium shot, crunches her hands on the concrete bridge rest, and a side shot, goes for 4.0 seconds. No lighting involved as its outside.
Not using Scene 8(replaced in the final video)
-long shot of Gurleen crossing the road to the driveway of the house with an expression that doesn’t mean anything just a straight face. Then Gurleen goes straight past the camera in fast walking motion. This shot goes for a total of 6.8 seconds. No lighting involved as its outside.
Not Using Scene 9(replaced in the final video)
-is about to open the door with a close up shot on the back f her head and she looks sideways to make sure no one is watching. This shot goes for only 0.5 seconds. No lighting involved as its outside.
Not Using Scene 10(replaced in the final video)
-A close up shot on Gurleen’s hand and the door knob, opening the door slightly and Gurleen gets inside the house. This shot only goes for 3.3 seconds. No lighting required to keep the same effect with the other Scenes previously used.
Scene 1
-Starting scene with a ball bouncing on the ground with an arial shot from a girls (Gurleen’s) window The ball bounces and the camera moves to reveal a 15 year old hitting the ball with a cricket batand hitting the ball to the fence, slowly the camera gows up to take a medium shot of the person next to the camera Gurleen looking down the 15 year old spying and processing all her moves. This shot goes for 3.8 seconds with LED light with white frame coming from the left side of Gurleen’s Face.
Scene 2
-Start the scene with Gurleen’s face and adjust the lighting so Gurleen looks cruel and dark work is about to happen this shot has to be a close up shot. And then carefully Gurleen picks up her Right hand and holds it strong and throws a dart, then the camera turns to reveal a dart board with a picture of the same 15 year old we showed earlier and in a medium pase the camera turns to its right and reveals a pin board with another photo of the 15 year old with a dart and some red circling and messages. This shot goes for 8.9 seconds with some lighting behind Gurleen to give a dark look and a clear look for the boards.
Killer: Gurleen Randhawa
Gurman’s House Driveway
-2.30pm-3.00pm, Adress: Near Gurman’s house 8606 Magnolia Dr East Hope Island, 4212
-Crew: Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa, Ali Duke

No lighting involved as its outside.
DAY/DATE
Filming
CAST
LOCATION
Day 2
15 Feb 2018
Not Using Scene 23
-In this scene Gurleen comes upstairs with the lighting behind her and she makes her way with a paper looking angry and upset, she trips on the middle step ( reason why to using). Medium shot of her. Went for 8.6 seconds, used lighting on her left side on the counter stair line.

Not Using Scene 24
-In this scene it starts with a medium shot of Gurleen turning to her left to make contact with the dorr knob, goes for 53 seconds with lighting from her left side LED White frame.

Not Using Scene 25
-In this scene Gurleen long shot with facing the door she just went through and is closing now. Turns and goes straight to the bag rack next to her and starts writing down a not. With lighting on her right side, goes for 8 seconds.
Scene
 Gurleen Randhawa, Gurmandeep Randhawa
St Hildas School
7.00am
Crew: Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa, Yumna Hameed







DAY/DATE
SET/PAGE/DESCRIPTION
CAST
LOCATION

DAY 3
1 March 2018
Scene 20
-In this Scene the camera is knee length, and is on top of the stairs, then Gurleen starts to come upstairs in medium walk and with lighting on the bottom, this scene goes for 10 seconds. LED light Orange Frame.
Scene 21
-The camera is shot Knee length down from the left side of the door, Then Gurleen comes rushing from the right side and is captured on the screen mid to full length. She is forcefully trying to open the door and goes inside. The lighting is on her left side giving clarity to her facial expressions. This shot went for 7 seconds.
Scene 22
-This scene starts with closing of the door and Gurleen with a medium shot coming towards the bag rack and then she gets a piece of paper and starts to scribble on it slowly showing her tape and then turns to stick the paper on the rack. Using the lighting on head level with orange frame. This shot goes for 18 seconds.
Scene 23
-This scene is of Gurleen leaving with strong posture and the lighting is on her back. She leaves turning the knob but does not turn around. This scene goes for 5 seconds
Scene 24
-This scene starts with Gurman walking towards the stairs and it is a medium shot and she is going up the stairs. This shot goes for 2 seconds. With from lighting coming from the bottom of the stairs  from the right.
Scene 25
-This scene is the same angle as Scene 20 and the lighting Is on the top this time glowing face of the 15 year old as she comes up the stairs in a medium shot. This Scene goes for 6 seconds. And Gurman the 15 year old is running up.
Scene 26
-This shot is of Gurman coming to the room starting with her opening the door and coming through to her left to the rack where her ipad and bag is. The lighting is on her left hand closer to the camera. The shot goes for 9 seconds.
Scene 27
-This scene is of Gurman medium shot looking at some documents and her ipad with the LED lighting on her right with a white frame. Then in the end her attention is diverted to something and catches a glimpse of something the camera can not see. This scene goes for 8 seconds.
Scene 28
-This scene is of Gurman from her hip to shoulder taking the sheet of paper infront of her and reading this shot goes for 3 seconds. With the lighting in the same place.
Scene 29
-This scene Is the long shot of Gurmans face as she reads the paper and her stern facial expression turns into a prank smile face and throws her paper away and walks back. Lighting on her Left with LED white frame. This shot goes for 6 seconds
Scene 30
-This scene is of Gurleen coming after Gurman is walking back and she turns to walk fast and angry, No lights involved in this Scene. This scene goes for 4 seconds.
Scene 31
-This shot is of Gurman’s face with a close up, As she opens her mouth in disbelief, this scene requirsa white frame LED on her face from a tilt from the bottom. This scene goes for 3 seconds.
Scene 32
-Scene This scene is of the counter act in a long shot with LED orange lighting on their left side. This hot shows Gurleen grabbing Gurmans wrist and when Gurman pulls over she falls on the carpet.
Scene 33
-This scene is a medium shot with Gurleen beating Gurman who is not visible I the camera. This shot uses LED white lighting near the camera from a lower angle. This scene goes for 6 seconds.
Scene 34
-This Scene is of Gurman lying still on the ground as she is incautious It is medium shot and her hands are on her face to show she’s been hit. There is lighting at the front. This Scene goes for 4 seconds.
Scene 35
-This scene is a medium shot of Gurman being dragged across by arms from the room. Lighting from the cameras back and LED white Lighting. This shot goes for 6 seconds
Scene 36
-This scene is of the Room door closing with everyone gone outside and Gurman dragged with Gurleen. No lighting. This shot goes for 2 seconds.
 Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa
St Hildas School
7.00am
Crew: Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa, Yumna Hameed

DAY/DATE
Filming
CAST
LOCATION

DAY 4 March 1 2018
Scene 7
-This scene shows a long shot of Gurleen coming through a pathways and up to the driveway. This shot is about 10 seconds long.
Scene 8
-This shot is of Gurleen coming up the drive way in a long shot no lighting. This shot went for 3 seconds.
Scene 9
-This long shot Is of Gurleen coming from behind the tall pillar to towards the camera. This shot also requires no lighting and is 3 seconds long.
Scene 10
-This scene is a close up of Gurleen looking to the sides to see if anyone is near and is close to the door. This shot is 3 seconds long.
Scene 11
-This shot is of Gurleen going inside of the house and looks back in a long shot with her face on both sides dark and in the middle a strip of orange light casted by the LED light Orange frame. This scene went for 5 seconds.
Scene 12
-This shot is of Gurleen medium shot of closing the door inside and getting the duck taoe and knife in a bag. LED light Orange Frame with the shot being 18 seconds
Scene 13
-This shot is of Gurleen Medium shot taking her ipad and bag leaving outside. LED light orange Frame. With 8 seconds.
Scene 14
-This shot is of Gurleen locking the door and going into the road pathway with no lighting and this hot goes for 6 seconds.
Scene 15
-Camera Knee length below, long shot of Gurleen walking towards the camera on a orange pathway. This shot has no lighting and goes for 4 seconds.
Scene 16
-This shows a medium shot of Gurleen sitting on the grass with her bag and ipad and she is looking at it in pain. No lighting. Goes for 3 seconds.
Scene 17
-A close up on her face. Goes of 2 seconds
Scene 18
-Close up of the ipad and revealing two daughters and father taking a picture. Goes for 4 seconds.
Scene 19
-Medium shot of Gurleen taking out knife and looking at it. Goes for 6 seconds.
Scene 20
-Medium shot of Gurleen getting up and walking of to her right. Goes for 7 seconds.
Scene 37
-Gurleen gragging Gurman on the floor to a room goes for 3 seconds.
Scene 38
-This hot is medium shot of Gurleen dragging me into a room for 5 seconds.
Scene 39
-This shot is of Gurleens close up as she stabs Gurman with a knife and looks mad. Lighting White LED.  Goes for 15 seconds.
 Crew: Robin, GUrman, GUrleen Randhawa
House
8606 Magnolia Dr East Hope Island, 4212
Main characters: Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa




Production Schedule

DAY/DATE
Crew Required
Time
Cast
DAY 2, 15 Feb 2018
Gurleen Randhawa, Gurmandeep Randhawa, Yumna Hameed
 7.ooam-8.10am
Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa

DAY/DATE
Crew Required
Time
Cast
DAY 3, 1 March 2018
Gurleen Randhawa, Gurmandeep Randhawa, Ali Duke
 12.00pm-3.00pm
Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa

DAY/DATE
Crew Required
Time
Cast
DAY 1 15 Feb 2018
Gurleen Randhawa, Gurmandeep Randhawa, Yumna
 7.00am-8.10am
Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa

DAY/DATE
Crew Required
Time
Cast
DAY 4, 1 March
Gurleen Randhawa, Gurmandeep Randhawa
 12.00-4.00pm
Gurmandeep Randhawa, Gurleen Randhawa